Wednesday, October 19, 2016

Radha and Krishna's story


                 “Did he really just walk into class?”, said Radha. 

                 It was 1:42 p.m. and Biology class was well into cellular division. Krishna, the school’s “bad boy,” had just walked in twelve minutes late. This put an upsetting look on Radha’s face. Radha was the most punctual person at Rosewood High. She never ditched class, nor received anything below a 95% in a class. She hated people who were late, and knowing exactly who Krishna was, she was shocked. Today was the day partners were to be assigned for the end of the year project. Radha was skeptical of who would be her partner since this was the project for which the teacher would assign partners. 
                  Half of the class was assigned and it was Krishna’s turn. The teacher looked around the room. He knew Krishna would never do his work unless someone made him do it. Instantly the teacher knew who to pick. With a huge grin on his face, the teacher said Radha’s name. Radha’s face turned into a frown. She hated Krishna and definitely didn’t want to be his partner. Immediately after class Radha went straight to Krishna and told him what he needed to do for the project. Krishna secretly had a crush on Radha, and to Radha’s surprise, he said okay. Radha expecting Krishna to object had secretly worked on some of Krishna’s part of the project. Every day Radha and Krishna would meet in the library and work on their project. Krishna showed great interest in the project, and would quietly get all his work set for the day accomplished. Radha grew fond of Krishna and didn’t mind being his partner. Her opinion of him changed, and she slowly began waving and smiling at Krishna in the hallways. Tomorrow was the day of their presentation and all Radha and Krishna had left to do was to practice their presentation. 
                  That night Krishna was hanging out with his friends and they were snooping around the high school. One of his friends decided to jump the fence and hit the lock on the door with a hammer. All of a sudden all the alarms went off and the police were on their way. Krishna’s friend already had a record, so he asked Krishna to take the fall. Krishna knew that if he took the fall for the break in, he would go to juvie and not make it his presentation tomorrow. He had a tough decision to make. 
                  The next Radha waited patiently in her desk five minutes before class. She watched the clock intensely as the second hand moved. The were was 30 seconds left till the bell was to ring. The bell rang, and Krishna was nowhere to be seen. Radha was confused. Krishna had told her that he would be there, and he even put in more than a hundred percent of effort into the project. 
                  Radha had a feeling that something had to have happened for Krishna not to show up. She was mad at Krishna but secretly was worried for him. She knew that if he didn’t make it, he would fail the class. She decided to do the project on her own. The next day Krishna explained everything to her, and Radha was glad that he wanted to be there for her, but couldn’t make it. 

Authors Note: 

For this story I chose to keep to the major ideas, while changing how they all happened. In this story the beginning is different from the original tale, but it ends similar. I decided to focus on the part where Krishna was in the forest and when he played the flute all the ladies were charmed by him. Though in this story he was the bad boy, all the girls secretly wanted him. However, this is not explicitly stated in the story. In the tale there were multiple ladies (Gopis) that were interested in him. He would play the flute in the forest and in a way serenade the woman. I switched the part where Radha was originally in love with him to hating him. She then falls in love with him, just like the original story. Krishna then gets in trouble and Radha saves him. In the original tale Krishna does not necessarily get into trouble, but does need the aid of a woman. This is to resemble how Radha decided to pour water down her feet and give it to Krishna to make him better again. Krishna in the end is not the bad guy Radha put him out to be. At the end of the story Krishna gets a chance to explain himself which allows Radha to forgive him and put a happy ending to the story. In the actual tale it is evident that Krishna really loved Radha, however in the end they were not able to be together.
Radha giving Krishna her Charamit Photo Credits: Epified

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5 comments:

  1. I really enjoyed reading your story. You managed to use clear words that described exactly what you wanted the reader to picture. Many of the stories I read were not very clear, which made it difficult to read. However, yours was concise and to the point. I liked how you decided to place Krishna in a modern-day setting. Even though he was known as the ‘bad guy’, he was actually very down to earth and caring. I wonder how he became a bad guy in the first place. Was it some specific event that changed him or was it a build-up of several bad experiences over time? Maybe you could add that into your author’s note. The only critique I have would be for you to try expanding your author’s note, which is where you could add the backstory on Krishna! Overall, I really enjoyed reading your story and I look forward to reading more of them in the future.

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  2. I really enjoyed reading your story. I found your story to be extremely well with the point and easy to follow while reading. I liked how Krishna was in a modern setting. I have done a lot of modernizing of characters and stories in my own as well and thought it was easy and fun to do. I liked reading your author's note and hearing where your ideas came from.

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  3. Hey I chose to watch the epified version of krishna as well and I absolutely loved it. It's such an interesting format, isn't it? It makes me wish I could actually draw haha. I think you've done an excellent job with the source material here though and it was pleasure to read it. I look forward to seeing what else you do this semester. Well done.

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  4. I really like this story! I like how relatable it is with the whole group project concept. We've all had terrible project partners in our life...right? I think it's very sweet high school romance story how Krishna wanted to do all his work to impress Radha. It made me so sad when Krishna chose to continue with his bad-boy ways and hang around the school, later taking the blame for breaking the lock. I was happy Radha was able to forgive him, but I wish there was a little more detail at the end of the story. As I said previously, this was great and I really enjoyed reading it!

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  5. This was such a great story! I love the high school setting and the young love theme. This is a relatable story and was a great modern twist on the original story. It was fun to flash back to high school for a bit. You did a great job of telling the story just like a high school-er would (in a good way). It felt so authentic and was so fun to read. I hope that you write more stories like this.

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